Mentill...that was fucking awesome.
I've always thought you were pretty good, and all the stuff I've read of yours has been pretty good. This was fucking awesome.
Excellent piece. All over, the flow, it just kept up, and it wasn't even like you were trying to make it flow...it just did.
Apart from the ending, which was outstanding by the way, this part was great:
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Originally Posted by MeNTiLL
Thunderin' clouds swarm around, while he stands atop the gold brick ground
From a distance U can hear the sounds, of angels yelling in a crowd ..
Of heavenly beings, a castle with arched doors lies at the end of the road
Far from any opera show, the struggles of Jesus Christ are told ..
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Fucking Great Piece Mentill.
Legends!