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Old 03-09-06, 02:59 AM   #12
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the only thing we do correctly
is to argue to and fight
so i wait for the beast to reject me
but hopefully they do what's right


Add "to" it makes it flow better. I like it nice twist at the end.


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Originally Posted by Young Dolla
*tears up* You bastard you unlocked some of my deepest feelings with this OM. But on the real thats real. I was really feeling this OM cuz i can relate to it.

^^^My OM is that dope^^^
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