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Old 02-26-05, 02:57 PM   #8
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
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From: East Coast
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Record n flop dex, couldnt drop if ya name Tex, writtin off like my checks...
not mulitily the best, bland like fuckin chex mix, swappin style like lil dicks...
only way you win if i pass-styx, think you dope afta first-fix, stay wit topical niches...
your small fry dealin wit text-rex,cumin early like first-sex, dont flex lex automatics ya chest...
******ok these lines here technically are multis but the flow is off
silly rabbit trix-for-kids, you cant match kicks-with-this, dont"notebook" chick-flicks-at-this...
got ya signs in a mix, twisted ridin pricks, childhood six pickin up stixs, throw bolder or ya choclate get nessed-quicks...
ya lack systematics, you like simplicity graphics, rhymes older than most attics, and cravin dopeness more than most-addicts...
*****this half of verse much much better, good pick up
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Im like being hot in the tropical….I saw coldness, HF battling nos in a topical
Im improbably unstoppable topping the tables, him being a challenge is just illogical

He called out k.onfilctz, pulled out no dick, balls aborted a kick.. saw his verse and choked
Was at home smoking the home grown, relaxing his mojo, knows he’s thrown so no-shows
*****felling the 1st bar 2nd was good too
HF suck on multis, duck down on both knees, back to posting verses of cold cheese
Oh please I sneeze snot that splits hotter trickles of top dollar liquid, FIREs down to 2 degrees

Call the nurse, we have to reimburse the driver of the hears because of the worse
Hells fire was held higher alighted the sky til it flied high enough then was trod on like turd
****ehhh, pretty good set up decent follow thru


gotta vote dex on this he took it slightly