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Old 06-27-07, 10:19 PM   #12
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Voted For: Lay Fear

feedback on mav....
punches just didn't hit hard enough.....and u had some lines that just didn't sound right like when u said "So it will be easy to "Lay Fear" without a fucking "erection"....and....."horny little bastard,and on account you like men
So i guess Ill show you "hard"
...................................if you alredy arent yet"....

^^^^^^^ those lines are like if your dissin yourself in a way as if your sayin u could fuck lay harder than other men or whatever lmao!....just the way it sounded when i read it.....~1~

feedback on layfear.....
ive seen some of your rhymes before and this isn't your best....but your punches were stronger than mavs....so i give u my vote....~1~
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