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Old 10-09-04, 08:21 PM   #13
The Jett
Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
 
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Vote - Vango.

Vango had a better structure along with better punches,flo, and wordplay.
Subtle...
You had the personal's. But your verse didn't flow well at all.
Also, You were really stretched.

Best Line:
Since the Iil prophet couldnt make it heres my prediction and you can quote this
"You have no chance of winning", your a Subtle Tee, meaning your barely noticed

My Advice.
Both came a lil stretched. Shorten em lines up. -1
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