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Originally Posted by 2v
poetry but eh it was ok thanks for sharing g
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okay first off it is an open mic. Notice the rhyming at the end. Second, if i see you posting like this again in either this forum or PS you will bw fucking banned. This isnt the first time ive seen you doing shit like this and its because of people like you these forums are dead. Post something constructive or fuck off and dont post. Okay now on with the feed. Sorry johnny
johnny my boy- this was pretty good. I liked the vibe i got while reading this. For some reason some of your line remonded me of lupe fiasco. While i was reading this i heard myself inside my head sounding like lupe with the accent. Shit was dope. Imagery was your strong point and your emotion was alright. Vocab was good aswell although i did see one gramer error but ohwell. All in all good piece mate. Keep it up. And if you didnt know 2v is well was twizted from rb lol