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Old 05-25-09, 02:26 PM   #7
MurDaH187
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Johnny 6 feet I know about you and your topical monster concept that deliever like none other....

Ok enuff of that...

The flow was decent to me it seem a bit off maybe it sound a lot better on audio or maybe I didn't flow it right while reading but decent, vocab was good as exspected and the concept was different to me so I didn't think it was good and I thought you was going to come at this different but the way you approuch this potic and the depth of it was excellet and well creative and I was impress good job I gotta ask what do you be smoking or thinking off when you do these topicals???
The image was good the rest was perfect....
Like I said the only thing I found a bit funny or bad or lacking was the flow as I read it so I would like to hear it in audio fourm but none the less 9.5 outta 10 most def for this short pieces that had a lot details in it....

Rtf....

My drops are more diss-like instead of topic focus...
But I will def hit this up with some shit in the near future for you to see...

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