Puttin MD On The Map
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
okay verbal got this battle
verbal-okay you had wonderful flow....it was a great read just rolled of my tongue as i read it.....very nice....you lacked vocab on this one but you made up with it in punches and personals...which won you this battle...your structure was also better than 9th degree.....ahah the punches were funny..i liked them a lot...very good multi's and meta's...good use of wordplay too...this was one of your better verses....keep it up
9th-okay you had good punches were humerous but verbal's were funnier to me....you had a horrrible structure..your personals lacked.....your one bar didnt rhyme good cuz defecit and impediment dont rhyme that well....you had better vocab than verbal......but you stretched your lines...you had good flow but verbal still topped you....i think you coulda came harder....if ya fixed up ya structure and worked on ya personals you woulda made the battle closer but verbal topped you....work on that stuff
no hate just tellin it how i see it...
return the favor honest explained vote..link in my sig....
peace~1
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