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Old 10-08-07, 06:22 PM   #10
ThatsWhatSheSaid
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lifes like a metaphor,cuz i'll DRIVE, this PUNK crazy like the 2 V's/
Martin or Kutcher, like u in an ASH-TON i spit that SMOOTH ish u need

^- First line didnt make alot of sense, second line I got but, it did end smooth, but you want to end with a bang, (punch), not really feeling your style, where was the diss? Hes in an Ash-ton, but thats not a strong diss, think when you write, how people are going to respond to what you say, you want that "Ohh factor".. na mean?

2v-- You came weak but you didnt have to spit much to beat Cardyac, no hate to Don but big difference in ability in this battle, stronger punch

Vote - 2v..
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