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Old 01-14-05, 04:22 PM   #7
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Best battle I've read on RV since I've been here....here we go

Quote:
Originally Posted by Pop Lotty
You earned your right to get here, but how could he lose
…vs. a washed up Chrit, and a couple of n00bs
Decent....not a hard punch....4/10
Led Poetic, the best? Plz, I don’t gotta try my hardest…
…to drop LP quicker than most of these signed artist
No..played like BLEH....2/10
Most of these niggas was picking you, u better, yet…
…why you started complaining when the battles was set?
Same as opener.....4/10
You bite a lot, Faceless and Ainmo in the biters forum dude
…So I’m sure the Hall Of Shame…leads right to your room
Nice....7/10
Plus banned for being a bad mod, I’m killing you with every letter
Was Auspicious to win? No, just took his name to make your record look better
Good....5/10
Not good, you think Pop is gonna respect you dog?
Schema, why wont you take some Led and pencil this a loss
Played....again...3/10
Nobody cares about you, so your careers on ice dude
Wanna be respected so bad, you put a mod’s name in your title
Huh?? You mean me? lol...[/lost]....Decent...4/10
This NewPort has just got smoked and straight up assaulted
and 5-0 won’t only be ya prize money, it’ll be who your callin
Played...3/10
Now Led bout to drop, supposed to show us his peak?
We gon get ready for some HOTSHIT…his opponent for next week
Could've been so much better....4/10


Pop Lotty's Overall Verse: 37/90
Comments:
You had alot of played out personals honestly.....a few were good, but you could've used them better punchwise...and honestly..if I remember correctly...I think your first verse you dropped is better than this one...still good job for the most part...



Quote:
Originally Posted by Led Poetic
How can we respect Lotty? we all know this hoe blows..
Yeah I KOed Chrit....but didnt you make it this far by no shows??
Decent....4/10
Fuck it Lotty...just face it...you'll remain a wack bitch..
Saw ya verse in LLL...~AnD I JuSt CaNt ToP tHaT sHiT~~~!!//*
Lol....good...6/10
Got pissed on at RB & RV....fuck Pops got the worst shit
When every personal ya use been done...sorta like your bitch
Played...3/10
You wont make it further in this tourney....cuz ya see...
..Im dope your wack...to sum it up...PL's just the opposite of LP
Nice...7/10
I pound this kid and leave bruises...and ya skin'll attract scars
..Wack kid posted his pic...he's the guy on the left in his avatar
Lol...been said before, but funny...5/10
I could give ya a face lift...but Im most likely bound...
To do the opposite....and get ya body lowered...into the ground
Good punch, wit, and wordplay...6/10
Dumb fuck...I dont know if it's amnesia...or the retard in him
But most kats have photographic memory..Lotty just lost the film
Meh....ok...3/10
..Ya egos inflated but dont let ya wack skills go to ya...
Cuz with a head like that...I bet ya brain isnt scared of claustraphobia
Decent...4/10
Lotty know his shit? heh...at least I COULD fucking mod
..Im comin so dope ya SoulClapped'll turn into a fuckin applause
Good reference...overall punch was decent...5/10


Led Poetic's Overall Verse: 43/90
Comments:
Centering your verse is gay shit...but you still done the best I've seen from you...iono....you started off ok....strong points were in the middle....slacked a bit before the end...and ended pretty good...


Vote - Led Poetic
Reason:
Just a harder verse honestly...Lotty had his ups and downs...and iono...alot of the personals you had...I've already seen said many other times...best lines were the LP PL line from Led..and the Hall of Shame line from Lotty....good read from you both...
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