wow, ive read a few topical verses but none are as good as these.

hellz fire- nice verse dawg. your imagery was good, but some more detail would have been appreciated. your emotion was aight, but i couldnt find a ton in it. your vocab was better, but that doesnt mean a lot to me. overall, i enjoyed your verse but it just wasnt as complex as fi's.

fi- wow man, this verse is amazing. the details, the flow, the story, it just all blends so well. the vocab use is perfect for the story, but your closer could have been worded better to tie with the topic. overall, you won this on the story and complexity.

v: FI

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