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Originally Posted by Sik Wit It

Nice beat, seems like it was a little loud,
but I think my volume is up too high.....

Dooms.. liked the lyrics on your verse
flow was pretty cool, and quality was
okay. Wasn't fuckin up or nuttin..
(Give me that Matrix beat or w/e
you did against FuxJustaWord, hoe!) <-------nah, FUCK dat.

Gutta.. liked ur lyrics to ur verse also
flow was aight, seemed pretty loud over
the beat, but anyway, quality was okay
also for you.

Overall.. pretty nice track. Keep it up.

Thanks for the feed, but that's a no-go on the beat. I used it for a track on my next mixtape before it was ever a beat in a battle, lol.

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Originally Posted by Will S.Unyu

the beat is dope
1st verse
it sounds loud for some reason
anyway
dope so far, like the flow, "leave you slumped like benadril

2nd verse
dope @ the "beat me or join me"
alot of dope lines
I like the entire approach

3rd verse,
the quality sound waaay different
listenin anyway
I liked the "do everything you couldnt do" and the "tonka truck" lines

overall dope track, a very NICE change up from all the other tracks bein posted on rv.
I liked the whole "cocky swagger" no homo.
rtf on my diamond in the rough track

word to the mammy. Damn, man nothing you say sounds gay, til lyou say "no homo" >: T But thanks for the feedbizzle! as always, I RTF'd on the link. One hunnit!!