Odi et Amo
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IP:
Quite good no-show verse actually, it had potential without a doubt. Especially the emotion was strong in your piece, I love how you viewed your soul as a seperate thing you know. Like another side, another part of you but then again, nothing alike. The vocabulary might have been upped a little, imagery was decent but could've been a lot better. Flow was on point usually.
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