^^^^word right on, i see what your saying about putting to many words in my bars.
and u made a good point by saying if they dont understand how it effects them or if they dont agree with it then there not gonna relate,or they just wont agree.so i need to go more in depth about it.and i could see how it would make people feel like their being preached at and agree..thanks for the feedback.

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