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Old 03-24-06, 06:15 PM   #23
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Voted For: Too E Zee

Feeding this chickens dick who's the last you served
Watch when you post you'll draw more z's
................................then a Papoose Verse
P.enis s.ucking a.sshole is what you probably scream
Especially since he takes more sticks then Rodney King

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lol.hahami vote has 2 go 2 e.z...... wuz bout 2 vote 4 tha other dude but ur lines swung me over wit tha funniest shit...
hhahaha.. good stuff here katt.... u had good punches n had a lot of comic in ur verse wich is good 2 see

but make sure u shouldnt keep havin lil pasuses...as said 2 me 2.
make it more effective.. twickd 1.... u had a lot better structure.. n ur punches kame of strong bt ... i duno... didnt feel it...

return tha favour... wit a vote... holla
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