i ask this bitch to drop early.. but the fag ran and hind....
so exspect ran to stop ya flow.. like ya crash'ing ya ryde....
With better wording, i think this could have been descent. Don't try to force wordplay though.

you a pussy wit no fans... Cat in all honesty... i can see dat you scared..
Antonio Banderas couldn't "Rock the Crowd"...
for his fans-sake, if his fan-base endorsed in "Rockin-Chairs
EXTREMELY forced, But i loved the concept man, it was a bit simple. But ok.
Don't try to put so much into it, shorten it up. And think clearer when your writing

.vs


you made every mistake, how'd the fuck anyone breakn ur bars down
& I'll drop an anvil on your head, so you could see stars now
Played as hell, but with better wording could have been ok
it his tornequeit pressured, an my offensives too much an onslaught
but his best offense is his defense, and its bout to get dropped
In general. This wasn't that good. But i liked it as an opener.
Wording definately could have been better. And it was also a bit
simple


Pretty weak. Both didn't really have quoteables. Just lines with
potential and terrible punctuation. Poorly worded.


V/Antonio BARELY. very hard to choose this, because both of the rest
of your verses....were weak as hell.

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