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Old 07-27-08, 10:29 AM   #8
Lay.
don't try.
 
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From: Above you.
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Nobody is savin' you from this, bro. In this bout, you're a zero,
So, I'll just split Atom in half if he prefers goin' out like a Hiro.
okay.
This fag can't detach the truth, bro and this simple fact is proof,
The only thing that Adam's known for is his history of grabbin' fruits,
haha
And King Solo. I know you hate a 'gay joke' but this stuffs alright dude,
Cause It's good to know that atleast someone hates Adam as much as I do,
k.
You go to the pubs, bro. Bouncers scratch your face with gravel,
And If I'm thrown out a single bar. It's cause that's all I need to take this battle,
na.
Think your verse draws a crowd? Ha, I know it's not bad to dream,
But in reality, dude? There's no way you'd ever have a ' fan to see,'
coo wp.
Think you the boss with words? But forreal, I ain't seein' this gay,
Cause this guys a dictator... Shit, typo. Replace that second T with a K,
na..
I got talent coordinators lookin' at me, you don't see those,
Only scouts seeking Adam ask him "thin mints or do-si-dos?"
haha..
Thinks he conquers the sack. But dude, you're a joke with all chicks,
You got them sayin' "OH ADAM..... up and count how many votes you lost with."
lol..good closer.

vs

We all have beliefs and well the crowd believes in you man,
But I'll be leaving this match with the title in hand.
na to basic.
I'm going to Trek over this mod, you can all watch it happen,
'Cause I can drop Shat with my verse and take down the captain.
good concept..eh wording.
This guy knows the whole league, that's how Kirk found his way,
But fuck your friends...
...........................Ahh shit, I won't hate on you Lay.
lol coo.
This fag gets raised and excited, to be blown he demands,
'Cause Kite likes being held in a ten year old's hands.
lmao.
And Kirk I'll admit you're coming out stronger than you did before,
One time unknown, now your OneStep...
..............................................Beyo nd your closet door.
decent.
Your shits all the same, gay shots and fat girl lines,
1-800-668-6868, give that a shout and take a load off your mind.
eh..
I know you're all for the 60's, but man I'm keeping it fresh,
But I won't rag on the Beatles, I'll just beat you senseless.
basic.
Fuck the HW champ, give up the act and show some respect,
You're just a herb who got noticed when all the vets left.
ok personal.



This was closer than I originally thought, Adam you dropped better than you have been..shakin off that rust. You had some ups an downs..you had some funny lines..some potential lines..an one or two played concepts..jus try an stay away from the basic shit..get a lil more creative, kirk had the usual consistency an edged it with a more polished verse.

v/kirk
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