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Old 07-27-08, 04:51 PM   #10
JTR
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Nobody is savin' you from this, bro. In this bout, you're a zero,
So, I'll just split Atom in half if he prefers goin' out like a Hiro.
lmfao, this was pretty ill +1
This fag can't detach the truth, bro and this simple fact is proof,
The only thing that Adam's known for is his history of grabbin' fruits,
it's decent but soooooo played out man
And King Solo. I know you hate a 'gay joke' but this stuffs alright dude,
Cause It's good to know that atleast someone hates Adam as much as I do,
lmao sick +2
You go to the pubs, bro. Bouncers scratch your face with gravel,
And If I'm thrown out a single bar. It's cause that's all I need to take this battle,
nah played and wack wording
Think your verse draws a crowd? Ha, I know it's not bad to dream,
But in reality, dude? There's no way you'd ever have a ' fan to see,'
cool wordplay, bad wording.
Think you the boss with words? But forreal, I ain't seein' this gay,
Cause this guys a dictator... Shit, typo. Replace that second T with a K,
LMFAO, i love this one +3
I got talent coordinators lookin' at me, you don't see those,
Only scouts seeking Adam ask him "thin mints or do-si-dos?"
nahh
Thinks he conquers the sack. But dude, you're a joke with all chicks,
You got them sayin' "OH ADAM..... up and count how many votes you lost with."
nope aint feeling it

vs.

We all have beliefs and well the crowd believes in you man,
But I'll be leaving this match with the title in hand.
lmao wtf? nahh
I'm going to Trek over this mod, you can all watch it happen,
'Cause I can drop Shat with my verse and take down the captain.
pretty good +1
This guy knows the whole league, that's how Kirk found his way,
But fuck your friends...
...........................Ahh shit, I won't hate on you Lay.
lol i thought this was good too, +2[b]
This fag gets raised and excited, to be blown he demands,
'Cause Kite likes being held in a ten year old's hands.
[b]nah you coulda worded this so much better, it was a good concept

And Kirk I'll admit you're coming out stronger than you did before,
One time unknown, now your OneStep...
..............................................Beyo nd your closet door.
nooooooooooooo
Your shits all the same, gay shots and fat girl lines,
1-800-668-6868, give that a shout and take a load off your mind.
lmao what's that? childrens help line? lmfaooo
I know you're all for the 60's, but man I'm keeping it fresh,
But I won't rag on the Beatles, I'll just beat you senseless.
it was ok but not hard enough
Fuck the HW champ, give up the act and show some respect,
You're just a herb who got noticed when all the vets left.
ooohh hardcore +3

Yea i got it at 3-3, Adam you shoulda tried a lil harder this is closer then you though it'd be, ima have to give it to Kirk tho cuz tho you both had some good lines his best were better then your best and his other lines i didn't quote were better then yours i didnt quote

v/kirk
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