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Old 12-18-03, 12:53 PM   #23
Jo-JO
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From: YC 17404
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Iv been searchin my mind slowly wondering how far in this world will i go
How many poetic punches in rap battles, open mics, and posts can i throw
Will rhymes live up to the structal, and thematical, topical rules of classic flow
Will I continue my constant mind enhances, liv up 2 da the chances or ill blow
Im tired of b-n threatend to b retired I have 2 much stress bsids fake threats
No backing to the things other people write, do u think it cuzes nightfrigt frets
You can't shoot a gat that can travel the computer screen to screen gap
So why do you think just cuz ima shorty that im not elevatin and i am a sap
People who have no tru skill trin to compare sayin dis rhymes ill and mines aint
I think if I continue with the same multies and structual elevatin im doin ya'll ill faint
So I think I answered my own question I have tru skills wit no repression
Im goin far and others are not under par still tryin to figure out who u are
PZ

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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17
16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases
17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life

20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish