Daubs
Good drop here.Wordplay was cool.Liked your opener the most.You still had some forcedness in there though..And your rhyme scheme was the simplest out of everyone else in this battle.
Like this one...
your life in a sentance: "boring online and dense"
You never off the net, social die as a consequence
^if you were saying this..you would say so-SHALL or So-you'll...social don't sound like that..
The jackpot line could have been better..if you didn't say wifey.If you said your htting their head or something like that..then ok,but not wifey.
Mim want's my help it seems, now your joining my crew
so il take you under my wing...and fly off without you
^this shit sounded gay as fuck..you'll fly off with mim?..WTF IS THAT GAY SHIT?!?To me,that sounds as if your saying he's your man.
Overall...decent,but could have been way better.
9th Degree
Yea,good as well.Best line was the 3 method one/adapted from you..cuz after readin your verse,the first thing i said to myself was "damn..you and daubs have an almost identical style".
Ones I didnt' like..
We're reaching the end, the death of Daubs and E.C will begin
I'll leave you on the floor to prove you're far from ceiling the win
^I've seen the ceiling/sealing wordplay done many times before.
Looks like pressure to me, and since I know you try to fake rhymes
You're 'bout to buckle, and not how you hold each other 'round the waistline
^DO YOU HAVE TO USE A GAY LINE LIKE THIS IN EVERY FUCKING BATTLE IN THIS TAG TOURNEY?!?!
So..yea..
Good drop overall..
E.C.
Ok,your opener was weak,as daubs did a mime-sis line..and you did a mimes-is line...made it look weaker,Personals were cool,like the ones about mim asking u to vote for him.You shouldn't have used their pics if daubs did it too.
Lines I didn't like..
look at 9th goin all crazy, add 81 so he can go in a box hunched,
and you could be at the right angle... n' still not drop a hot punch
im sick of these bitches, chill wit ya ego coz ya skills dont match up,
see imma butcher on the internet... now i'll easily leave you hacked up
i'd add up your skills to mine, but i wouldn't be able to divide it,
n i'd comment on ya audio, but it's that bad...
... i can't find a word that describe it,
i'm similar to 9th's father, see, his verse just left me torn,
coz i read his verses n think what the fuck?!...
...like his dad the day 9th was born
watch his hopesfall down... i need more lines... so sue me,
i know your popular, but shit...
...text heads arn't supposed to have groupies
Yea..so bassically,It was the generic punchlines I didn't like.The personals was where you shined.The rest of it was blah,and that may have hurt you.
Mimesis
Dude, you're ugly as shit, skinny, garbage and weak.. man, E.C is all that
And the first fag I've seen who's chins dropped more then his balls have
^possibly the best line in this battle.
Obviously,your verse must have hit them the hardest,cuz you were rippin on their looks.The daubs part didn't connect in my opinion.I just don't see daubs as fat in that pic.
The personal disses hit hard..
Lines I didn't like..
His vote and match ups.. all you've wrote is sad, fuck.. man, I'm serious
I'll just drop the rest of my verse.. while you faggots just drop.....period
Nobody wants to collab with you.. and as soon as I rap, your dead, see
Jesus, your fucking fat as hell.. nobody wants to fit that style today
I mean, my name, age, sex and city can fit on the profile of your face
I would say I hold more weight..
..but we already know Daubs dick ain't that heavy
SO yea,this was a really close battle..
But i honestly think mimesis and 9th edged this shit out.
E.C used their pics,just like daubs..and that sucked.Plus his generic punches were weak.
And daubs had a bit of forcedness in his wordplay...plus some lines that sounded gay..