Life is a Constant Battle
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IP:
This was wack because if ya peep da rules first and third lines must have same rhyme skeme, and multis must atleast be 2-3 words/syllables or what eva...
The break down...
Blitz-your piece was confusing as fuck, lines were thrown together with rhyming words but thats it...didnt see much of anything on the structure front...like kon i give ya a lines all 1/10...and ya had no real punches need punches to win
E.C.- your piece was a little better but not by much ya actually rhymed, could follow, and had a punch or two...but it wasnt that much better...multis werent there much
vote E.C.
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