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Old 08-26-05, 09:17 PM   #9
Sean Gunner
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Apos
You have a remote chance to win.. Cause EC your a slouch...
kid your losing control of this battle.. and its not between the couch
Nice wordplay + punch.
EC wants to go 10... but i'll be killing him in 2 bars for sure...
cause when i told E to think outside the box.. he started writing by the poor..
Lol, again, nice punch. Set up was bad though.
EC its a fact your ill.. but its nothing that cant be fixed by a lowely nurse..
and you were soo fucking stumped.. you had to uproot your whole verse..
Ok punch. Not that amazing.
You dont get any feed on your stuff.. cause its clear no one gives a shit for E..
And you could get casted for star trek.. and not Cling-On to the Victory...
Ok wordplay. Heard it before.
Taking the UK by storm.. nah a little sprinkle doesnt count you lame.
Even on RV your a no name.. So its pretty obvious.. the EC will never reign..
Ok wordplay personal.

Overall, I liked this verse. Had some funny and hard hitting punches. Not a lot of good personals though.

E.C
in english litteracy grammer gets you all the answers,
aposprophe's only above our lines becuz his texts below our standards,
Ok wordplay punch.
i knew rv was full of homo's these people just get me vexed,
apos was in the elite 8 only coz he liked getting his willy wet*,
Nah, not feeling this punch. Bad set up.
verses are weak, people don't wanna read it, scrap ya lines,
coz you have to make them big, for it too catch their eye,
His text is small. Bad punch.
see, willy likes to get rode, so he looks for tackle to grab,
obviously it's true coz he wins all the battles he has,
Compliment him a little.
let me exclaim ya ego(!) ill miss w(')rds and laugh,
coz this lesson in school questions(?) all the skills you have,**
Ok wordplay punch. Nothing wow worthy.

You need to work on your set up lines. If you can perfect those then you will be a force in this league. Till then you will lose.

Apos gets the vote for more consistant and hard hitting punches.

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