Hmmm...well, the title was a bit off the topic. You never led to managing your anger, so why would you title it something that implies some sort of actual management to your anger?

It was very simple, very simple. Vocabulary, scheme, everything...and that was I think made this good.

I don’t agree with everyone saying how this had a lot of emotion...errmm
Well, yes, this piece had emotion, but not a lot.

“Fucking punk who think he’s hardcore
Thinks he is better than me, please
Your just a straight bitch, nothing more”

Errmm...don’t do that, it was more like you were battling (very badly I might add) in the part I just quoted. It really didn’t fit into the piece.

Not to bad overall. Keep it up.