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Old 11-01-03, 10:09 PM   #7
DthsMissingAngel
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Good drop. Structure was nice. Could use some better vocab. Structure was good, and u got ur point out right away. Nice ending, totally can relate. Flow was good. Lot of emotion, mainly hate. Overall good job. Keep droppin. Much respect.
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