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Old 10-25-06, 12:45 PM   #15
Young Fear
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I lick a shot for my niggas who dont snitch when they knocked
who know its better to be in the pen, than a bitch on the block
Lick a shot for niggas thats too proud to cry
Askin God why should good people be allowed to die?
Lick a shot for the single mothers raising too many kids
Lick a shot for too many niggas doin too many Bids
Lick a shot for my educated brothers
who even when they was hated on, never hated others
Lick a shot for dogs who cop that weight
For niggas who's better that Kobe, n neva got that break
Lick a shot for my homeless homies eatin the trash
For the kids at home eatin ketchup packets for a week n a half
Lick a shot for the Teens who b questioning life

^^nice opening. It caught my attention quick and made me wanna see the rest. What makes it so hot is its real life shit. Everyone i know can relate to something in this verse.

Lick a shot my niggas doin life in the pen
For the wives who was married to em, start writin again
Lick a shot for them cats who be bootleggin them hits
Get grip, but just dont be bootleggin my shit
Lick a shot for the black girls carryin heavy ass books
Walkin down the streets to school, beside deadly ass crooks
Lick a shot for players who shoot better than Bird
For my niggas who spit better than Hov n can never be heard
^^ I didnt like your opening too much but this shit was tough right here. Nice way to close.Again this shit is relatable(might have just made a new word)


Lick a shot for tha kid who growin up in tha cold
for tha kid on tha block makin what they sold
Lick a shot for tha kid wearin jesus clothes
god bless them rags, holy as an apostle pose
Lick a shot for those who in tha hospital
prayin for survival, or revival, nd thats it possible
Lick a shot for the girls puttin up wit they man
lil shawties aint got put up wit his hand
Lick a shot for tha OG's postin tha block
62 years old still packed witta gloc
Lick a shot for tha innocent on death row
they aint commit no crime, but only they know
Lick a shot for tha fallen, six feet underground
pour out tha liquor for them, im buyin this round
Lick a shot for tha ladies who cant feed they seed
workin three jobs jus to supply what they need
Lick a shot for my crew, and my down ass girl
Lick a shot for my people. and the whole damn world
^^Best ending to the song you could have chosen. Sick one solidified it.


All in all I cant find a single flaw to this piece. The good thing about this piece is you didnt overdue the vocab. That kept this a hood anthem.10/10 a classic
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