good drop,has alot of heart to it. rhymes are ok.they sort of fall of toward's the end,as if you ran outta rhyme's but still wanted to get it done.

Go ahead, smoke laugh and joke wit ya homies/
But do me a favour, when you sober don't call me/
I'm finished wit ya, I hope and pray that you ain't bitter/
Used to have the goods, nowadays you don't deliver/
^^

it still rhyme's a bit, all depends on your pronounciation.

hook's kinda deep. I thought you could of elaberated on this topic a bit more, using alot more imagery.
overall allright drop.

6/10
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