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Old 08-10-04, 01:38 AM   #11
JPoll
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Its simple as that, you suck at it so you better quit rap.
Been ghosting for peeps? Guess thats why most of RV is wack.9
your bars are old as hell, thought they were coming from ancient times.
Dug a few of your lines....... and reported an archeological find.9.5
This kid is wack as hell, no lie just writing a description.
.....cause Apo's day will never come like atheist predictions.7
& dont worry, when kid's bite your rhymes, don't take it as a surprise.
....Its not that your dope, its cause your skill's just that size.7.5
He's not smart. Posting his verse is like asking tourists for directions.
and in this battle his life's on the line like dial-up internet connections.7.5
after dropping he'll be on the ground, kind of like the pic in his AV.
cause I'll be busting holes in Apo like having sex with newborn babies.6.5
I'll rape P, this battle's like one of Apo's family parties.
Because after this verse, eosis will end up getting fucked over at RV.8.5




apo
I'll be drunk later so I'll drop now

Check our rankings..its clear who is better..
..coz P.S. comes last..like extra info in a letter.10
Sick of ya dumb shit..so bitch ima knock u out..
..coz ur teachers dick..is the smartest thing from ur mouth.7.5
You write like Mike Tyson..dogg it’s official,
..Coz ur skill is empty..like his initials.9.5
Ur a geeky white kid..& ur writtens are crap..
..& ur so fuckin preppy..even ur name rocks Gap.7.5
Used ur punches before..there so dam old..
..ill write em on u nose..then begin 2 break the mould.8
If ur moms the word..I kno ur no religious believer..
..but by the way u spread it..I shud call u a preacher.8
Ur an ugly fuckka..& no chick wuda wanna romance you..
..& basically ur not wack………………………………………⠀¦â€¦â€¦
…………………………………………†¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦.
………………………………...its actually what u’ve advanced to.8


ps=9+9.5+7+7.5+7.5+6.5+8.5=55.5/70
apo=10+7.5+9.5+7.5+8+8+8=58.5/70

Vote- apo...two of the best verses i've read in a long time though...this could be the match of the tourny

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