okay this is a good shadowville beat....opening coulda been stronger..like u shoulda shouted an echoes" once I walk thru da door!!!" to set it off an let people u busting doors down...okay u def have grown into a nice flow but prob now is u changed ya flow an its alot more fluid but now u use this flow all the time...u relying on drags on the rhyme word at end of every line an it gets repitive...I know how u gon end every line....delivery is tight its laidback but still intense the perfect emotion for this beat....I love the hook...u punched in ya phrases jus right...thats exactly how I woulda structured a hook on this beat...u good effected it better tho like a lil trial echo on the part "on & on & on" woulda really brought it out but people gonna sing along to that shit nonetheless...an last but not least the lyrics....I liked the concept an the story line first time I really had u start an finish a topic strong...a good establishment song where u let people know what u about as a MC...good shit...def listening to this again......1

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