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Old 08-14-08, 07:33 AM   #6
Kirk
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Your punches are trash.. I don’t fear you fag.. your fucking rep is sad
They say you’ll beat me, youandwhatarmy.. I’m the only friend you’ve ever had
^Haha. I kinda liked this one. Good opener.

Talk like I gassed YOU up here, I can’t believe you flipped that concept queer
But MY ego’s still like a ballon, and YOU’VE been trying to blow me for years
^This was alright. Didn't like it as much as the first one.

Style’s boomed with wackness.. the shit really don’t scare my ass geek
Fear ain’t the answer anyway, unless the questions who beat your ass last week
^Haha. Not bad. Could have been worded better but I liked it, still.

Trying to diss in other chats, why do you stay disrespecting on these threads
And how the fuck you gone beat me..
..you even admitted your punches go over everybody’s heads.
^Ehhh. Didn't like this one much.

^ Yeah, you know that shit talk.. but your stockpile was never even fading gay
& you can hate on the voters all day, you weren’t getting a fucking vote anyway
^Not bad. Alot of personals so far.

Also, what’s with your girl’s lying ass, acting like the truth won’t be spilled
Say she ain’t been plugged, then she got turned on after every hole was filled
^Ehh. Alright.

Have a name change and stop the shit talk, only King Solo is abusing the floss
Stick with the theme to.. coz after this there’ll be no space between YouAndTheLoss
^Ehhhhh. Again, alright.

Forced wordplay, clumsy wording.. no wonder you get put to the floor fast
& I’ll put enough chips in your shit, the cookie monster’ll faceplant in your ass
^Haha. Kinda dumb but funny.

The props are appreciated, but I know Lay’s really feeling the way I work it b
And his comment only proves that you can’t mimic my swag 100% perfectly
^Not bad.

I fathered your whole fucking style, but I won’t drop a son flip on you biff
Only family ties here are you to your mother to the boulder I’m throwing off a cliff
^Wasn't feeling this one.

I’m raping this fag’s whole verse.. the world knows that I’m ripping him drastic
Voters’ll be left with some assaults to observe like I was flipping gymnastics
^Wasn't feeling this one too much either.

It’s a fact and I know you see.. I’m just better.. my style is cool and groovy
You been riding the jock so long..
..I thought you was a cheerleader in a high school movie
^Nah. This one was pretty weak.

You’re ass is fenced in wackness..and whatever plan you cooking, I’m foiling
Known to diss guys, yeah.. coz you been posing here as decent since joining
^Pretty good wordplay. Liked it.

HA! You still think you’re gonna beat me? Fuck you.. I’m dope, you suck
I’d wear you out, but strobe would have to change my status to ‘broke as fuck’
^Lmao. That was dope, dude.

So look jew.. steal my flow, my style, my concepts.. try and get a better rep
But know that talent-wise I’m like double You.. like the one you’ll never get
^Nice flip on a played as fuck concept.

You boast real quick.. but I’m levels ahead of you, kid you know where the bench is
Army is only fitting for this.. coz your skills have never risen out of the trenches
^Naaaah. Wasn't feeling this much.

Call me a cocky fuck in your verse.. I don’t give a shit.. I’ve owned many rings
& you’d have an enormous ego to if you had ACTUALLY accomplished anything
^Not bad, cocky fuck.

And you ain’t a baller neither bro.. your game wreaks of gay desperation
Shit, when you ain’t taking it to the hole, you’re looking for that 3pt penetration
^Haha. Also not bad.

Please talk how all I do is stay on RV.. but you need to recognise son
Your entire life will be RV..
..coz when I kick you out my house your ass’ll be back living in one
^Lmaooo. That was fuckin' funny.

Even my garbage punches could smoke you, drop you, sever you like a knife
Coz I got a diss I pull from the ass that has made you a zealous advocate for life
^Alright closer.




don’t front like you’re dope, I’ll smash you completely
I do commend your honesty though..
..coz that’s the only way you could ever defeat me
^This was alright. Didn't like it as much as Solo's though.

95 wins on your record, I guess you been pretty dressed up
I’ll still drop King with WhatArmy?.. the entire fucking chess club
^Not bad.

speaking of, I see that your full of lies all the time
coz how you gone call urself a King when ur nothing but a pawn of mine
^I've seen this way too much.

your gay with this long verse shit, even though I could drop plenty
but 40 lines bro? your garbage is the fucking reason the line limits twenty
^Not bad.

I used to think you were decent, now you droppin poorly
s’like I already dissed the voters and they’ll STILL fucking vote for me
^Naaaah.

I don’t have 6 points like you, but that don’t mean I ain’t got clout
coz I haven’t had a no-show or faced a topical guy who’d already signed the fuck out
^Not really feelin' it much.

E-Clipse, Gzus Chryst, X-Treme.. I don’t know which one of you to kill
not that it matters..
..you’ve had so many Aliases and never managed to Garner any skill
^Not feelin' this one much either.

i’m not here for respect, my style is catered to be vexing dudes
whilst ur pedigree has hit rock bottom like you was stealing wrestling moves
^Ehhhh.

I stole your style? why would I wanna drop a weak verse
you got pussy punches.. after you’ve gagged and tied the bitch up first
^Wasn't really feeling this. Worded poorly. Kinda threw it off.

and you know the truth of it queer
that I’ve got a torrent of punches you’ll be leeching off of for years
^Liked this one.

i’m a one man army.. ur shit’ll get owned by mine when I give u a swipe
coz kid ure known to force it, & draw those white sticky liquids from a pipe
^This was dumb.

and you get no play, flexing your game from every side
talking like you a mack? shit, its no fucking wonder that Bernie died
^Not liking this one much either.

I WILL FUCKING CRUSH YOU! I’m knocking you off your throne
the establishment owns our talent?
.. well I always said you had none of your own
^This was an alright one.

I won’t knock your swagger though, really your steppings scary
plus, I know you don’t want me to tell dudes how alcoholism IS hereditary
^Eh. Not feelin' it,

and kirk likes the funny shit, so you may be in with a vote
coz I got one or two comedy lines, whilst ur entire verse is a joke
^Hahaha. That was actually pretty funny.

you can talk like you’ll beat me.. maybe leave me with an 0-2 record here
but you STILL got an 02’ record for NEVER droppin punches outside that year
^That whole 02 mess is pretty played. Wasn't a fresh flip or anything.

your gangsta talk is fake to, so drop it from your rapping lines
coz you ain’t been strapped since u found out straps give you tanning lines
^Haha. This was dumb but funny.

I demolarize and crush, kid you should stop dissin b
or I’ll leave you such a hollow man, kevin bacon’ll be down for the trilogy
^Haha. That was funny too.

I’m ‘bout to feel the force unleashed, honestly bro that’s tired
and if you was the apprentice..
..Alan Sugar would be the first to say YOU’RE FIRED!
^Ehhh, Not feelin' it.

I’m done, signed out.. don’t give a fuck about this maggot
so one of the d/r’s can vote.. and then rest can chain vote for this faggot.
^It was alright.



Both of the verses were pretty good. Solo came really fuckin' hard, man. He had a few punches that I didn't like but they were just here and there. Quite a few punches that I thought were funny as shit which is always cool to me. Pretty consistent and what not. Laz had a pretty good verse. I feel like he was a bit more inconsistent than Solo and his hardest hitting punches didn't hit as hard as Solo's best. He really picked it up at the end though. Threw out quite a few funny punches and closed pretty well. Overall I think Solo took this. His best punches were better than Laz's and he was more consistent. Had a better verse really. Both of your verses were good though.

V/Nick.
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