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Old 03-23-09, 06:16 PM   #2
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Very nice drop.

This flowed well for the most part, although in some spots
it seemed stretch because your line length was so long.
The story was cool, very interesting topic and concept.
Deffenetly one of the best OM's i've seen on RV in a while,
but that's not really saying much.

Keep dropping here, I'll keep reading if nobody else does.

RTF if your ever around...
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3266221
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