Wow, you just shit all over it eh, IG. lol. It's just a keystyle story I whipped up son, be easy. The hook wasn't supposed to be original, just a re-working of the Meth/Red version. Some of the lines were amateurish no doubt, but I wasn't exactly trying to spit some flawless shit, nahmean? And the transition thing? What you mean? Flew around the world and reversed time to avoid denting the grill again, see? Personally, I thought the the first half of the "song" was the weakest, til I actually figured out what I was writing really. But, thanks for the constructive criticism, at least you took time to break it down and read the thing.

BTW, you been rappin' 10 years and that sig is the best you got? Some aight multi's, but your shit ain't exactly Illmatic material either homey.