Thread: Love Pains
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Old 09-17-08, 06:20 PM   #2
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Don't rhyme words with the same word.

Example:
Night
and
Night

Site and sight, look at it I don't have to say any more.
Upgrade your vocab. Put some emotion in it your talking about love come on girl. Just cuz it rhymes doesn't make it a rap or poem.
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