i'm only droppin these 10 lines so i don't no-show,
got 15 minutes so all you voters can expect this to be so-so,
see what i mean, but whatev here comes some predictable filler,
i'ma beast on this lame dude, call me a ghostface killer,
i'm betting you can tell that my heart just ain't in it this week,
tryna equalize my life right now, this little dude is just me eq(meek),
what the fuck man i'm throwin stupid bars, you better trash this,
beat it and throw it to the curb, like i did your last bitch,
i apologize to all my boys who wanted me to come out hard,
so lay or kirk or whoever, hit me back up when the playoffs start...

(this verse was mainly a self prop and had some lines when you actually dissed yourself. I know you stated you didn’t have much free time to drop the verse, but you should work on you creativity a little more)


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ok ok 1st off im tryin of yall using that same ghostfase killer line
its gettin old and jus by readin ur shit i can tell ive already wasted my time
you came with no heat and thats why this battle will be easily captured
my punches will leave this bitch deeply enraptured
now u went and brought the bitches into the rap that was a little uncalled 4
only thing i wonderin is where you get ur bitches from ur corner store
you came weak this time dog i actually heard you were pretty descent
but like your girls ur knees got weak so you switched your style up now ur bent
id really like 2 battle u again sometime when you can actually write something descent
this rap isnt even worth 4 any1 2 add their 2 cents!

(you need to work on the content of your verse. You had a lot of basic stuff, but the creativity is really missing out of your verse)/



Vote – LFS, for having a verse that had better content and forming slight better punches

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