Cut

j-dilla wut kinda name is that? i'll roll him like a jay and blaze it phat
he got an interest in music and money, but all the payments lack
these personals were lacking...you coulda made them better wit out just sayin them straight "hes got an interest" make them flow in ya spit
face it he's wack, probly not even a newbie-nah probly is
cuz he culdn't even set the battle, but a loss is set to properly fit
decent... first line u said something then agrued wit yaself..kinda wack though
you could have a ton of oxygen, just to go one breath with me
still in abundance, i'll take your man power like a vasectomy
word play was meh...this was just aight..so-so i say
for you it's a hysterectomy, cuz J's just a bitch made nigga
cut? i barely hit you with a punch, and you lookin for the switchblade nigga
not feelin it, punch was direct and it didnt hit very hard cuz it wasnt complex
that's cuz my shits sharp as fuck, you just a softcal critter
while i'm in the winter, u think u hot we'll see who thaws out quicker
Wasnt that direct again with the punch... kinda like a question ??

Cut - do u write open mic, cuz u seem that you would do better in open mic and poetry then battling...


J

My name is J-Dilla, and i flow with the finesse
Your coughing up your lungs cause my lines hit "in u'r chest"
no rhyme at all, wack punch 2
LS? whats that? the name of ur click.
With a swift kick, I connect, u need an eye patch like Slick Rick
Who? even if i knew who it wouldnt be decent.. i say - Under Par
Your paper thin, my pen can rip right through you...
Cause im thick, and the trick, is my style's like kung-fu
No punch and just tryin to make yaself look good wit kung fu, wack and wack
Its an art, takes patience and I dont let you get to me
I'll wait till I burn your flow like a third degree.
played....flew right past cut
So when your there lookin' up all you are is debris,
Im the bank nigga and i got you imbitched in my trustee.
wow...wizzak, its ok though u will learn.....i hope
I can see how it started...you wanting to battle.
You started off debating should I do it or not??
no rhyme again.. no punch again... i say wack again
But now that you started and your constimplating...
Inovating your flow as I was patiently abating...
look at my writing above and dont read the first 3 words
I got tierd, i was ready, and ur on ur computer masterbating.
This rhyme took me soo fucking long cause I feel asleep waiting.
i fell asleep reading.. and no punch again
Waiting to finish this bottle so I can smack you with my empty Shmirnoff.
You say Im soft cause of Cali, but ill cut ur face off like 'Face Off'.
wow.. i got a 4 letter word... can u guess it?

J- You really need to get some help and elevate...take a trip to Wackness Emergancy Center and get some tips...ohh and maybe you should write open mics too

overall - weak battle but my vote goes to Cut for actually having punches

__________________