Daemon:

Nice use of vocab and imagry. Your diction was very descriptive which I liked. However, I think you should have made your verse longer, ya know? You didnt actually get into much detail about the overall topic. I feel that you could have gone many different ways with the title Awakening Creatures. The path the you chose to base your verse on was a little weak and I think thats what hurt you the most.

Tweety:

Right off that bat I noticed great diction, structure, rhyming and excellent imagry. I knew you were always dopeness at topical and was expecting something this good. Honestly, one of the best topicals Ive seen out of you, permitting that it was not a topic that you picked to write about. You wrote differently than Daemon, took a different path with the given topic and it was a good pick. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your verse, good job.

V/Tweety..........................