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Old 02-01-07, 01:47 PM   #6
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
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From: East Coast
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Originally Posted by Comedian
i'm carrying heat but use knives on you because it's shorter
Cocaine lives life on the edge... and I'm known for cutting corners.


Quote:
Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
L or W? with no effort i'll give this slut the former
they say he's got the edge.. this week im cutting corners


Quote:
Originally Posted by Comedian
That is pretty similar. I'm not going to deny it. My only defense is that I've never even read an RB battle.


Quote:
Originally Posted by Comedian
I gotta start reading more battles. Seems I think everything's played but my own stuff





Your making progress but the type that I notice is different text
Cuz 'read more battles' is code for "Let me see who rhymes Im flipping next"
Dog if THIS is the result, your future is bleak as fuck
Improvements? ya verse is the Greatest hits of our weakest stuff!
So all those bars that voters read....they'll actually be reminded
Every concept you attempt is naturally Feeble Minded
Fucking garbage, N.Tavarez get ate by this herb? Never
Your such a nobody, U make Nicole Ritchie appreciate HERS better
This kid always gets feedback when spitting, he's really fresh
They hear his verse, and leave Comments to help with his shitty breath
Ya girls a slut too! you'll catch her hanging where the sleezy mingle
Thats why you'll always go getter.........Like the Jeezy single
You know u should leave the bitch,guess love for a slut wont let you
But its a shame when RV leagues is closing faster than her legs do
Plus undressing chicks glance at cha body and vomit quick
Wont even buy the newspaper....after watching THIS comic strip
Them jeans is mad fucking tight kid, enough to scare dudes
The way he rock capri son, you'd think the juice guys make fashion wear too
30 lines? this aint Cypher! Im quicker to roast this queer
And you wont get the win^ Like when Nick Fletcher decides to post in there
In this battle fuck a gun, you getting clipped and bruised
This kid is only a Sharpshooter emulating Bret the Hitman moves
Im'a treat you like a Jay album.....And leave you done
U get dropped if you tryna take my Kingdom, Come
BITCH!!!!
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