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Old 03-02-06, 12:23 PM   #2
Spite
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aight i noticed u aint getting any feed either so ima feed you

no way u gonna spit to the eva essence track??? haha lets see

oh nvm lol. u start right off him i expected a intro.
u sound black in the first verse for some reason lol. not tryna offend u or some shit
hook is decent. second verse seems better. like at one point u have this constant rhythm that sounds real tight. aight third verse. okay mike b, someone else, now i get it lol. cause see u didnt mention this was a collabo. his flo is nice so is yours, i think yours is a little better. overall its a dope track
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