Im feelin this son....melodies//is right..you havent got the intro right..the intro needs to be different to the verse..drums and melodies all good...and hook is aiight pianos is off tho...

I mean intro 20 seconds, n then verse 40 seconds..hook 20..u dig...n go like that...n the intro has to have the least intro's..verse..kick in with a new drum or the first drum if theres none in the intro..and hook add sumin like a piano/string/guitar..and that's a basic beatizzle

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