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Old 09-07-05, 02:35 AM   #9
Calypso
£ivin a £yfe of Çrhyme
 
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Voted For: GrEeN PaRtY!

GreenParty

Suckin kangaroo sacs "down under" that name?
So ashamed, that ya got sick from it mayne..
8/10-Came out with a nice personal in ya opener
Cum guzzlin "outback" dude w/ an attitude..
This homos wearin panties in shop, fondlin cattle tools.
6/10-Kinda weak...didnt come hard enough man
Hoin' through battles fingerin his anus...
knowin who this baby rattles w/ is too big for the game.
5/10-Didn't really make sense to me
Cus, i been ready for this thrillin win..
While you bask-in dick grippin w/ ya double chin.
7/10-Alright personal
Son, lookin ten in ya pic, fingers as long as stilts..
No true hustler rocks hot pink wallpaper in his sigs bitch....
8/10-Nice personal in ya closer too

Green-No real punches in ya battle, was mostly personals....structure was alright, but could use improvement

Overall-34/50

AITZ

green party doesnt no what its like to get crafty
i punch sharply to leave this cat apart-badly
6/10-weak opener, rhymed seemed forced
you could never devour this, with your cowardness
nothing but full powers that are rich, watch me merk this bitch
8/10-A pretty good line nice punch n multi
hurtness is throwin through this keystyle attack
formin purpleness around his eyes like a punch from the school bratz
6/10-Weak
got the crowd sayin "i felt this" when my flow makes there eyes become open
because ur response is like "whats wrong kid" he will never get a promotion
7/10-2nd line was alright, 1st was weak though
fuck a sucker punch ill fly straight at you while ur watching
then take ur bitch to lunch because u never touched her heart with choking...
5/10-Last bar made no sense to me at all

AITZ-Work on punches n personals in ya battle...structure was off too, need to elevate some

Overall-32/50

Vote-Green

Green took this one by a hair....a pretty weak overall battle...neither came with any decent punches....Green took it because he at least had some personals in his drop. You both need to try and elevate and get some better vocab
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