Thread: Just Breathe
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Old 04-06-06, 08:27 AM   #2
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IP:

The desire to be great, in the eyes of the beholder with hopes
Sparked a stone on a boulder, smoldering the papers wrote
So maybe when you feel you’re lungs fill with smoke
Just breathe, go to sleep with the dreams that you broke.

^^ Dam fams that is well dope,.. I really like your style of writting, vocab
always on point,.. flow was really good. This was a really deep drop fams
keep on coming.

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