no way you can top the opening line from the real song....lets see.....?
nope.....
first guy had a pretty good flow not enough emotion somepoints...and a lame closing line but pretty good presence tho....not too bad lets see how you come in...
eh, you had good swager on this shit...but your verse was a lil off topic a bit...but you did good with it...needs some adlibs to keep it intresting kinda lulls you a lil bit...lets see ya other dudes...
ouch...cockpit line....really? i think i heard that one in mainstream already...means your a lil late on that one....BUt same thing as past tense...not bad just nothing to keep me intrested in it all verse long....
3rd guy tried to get a complicated rhyme scheme with this...not that type of song....not too bad, i liked the first guy the best imo....but nothing as good as "ay yo this beat is bananas" this one i have to chop up to the mainstream....get more hype like they did...

rtf on good morning

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