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Old 01-13-05, 09:03 AM   #2
Tha Q
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lol...this nigga gotta be different and put his shit on "D" music...lol...j/k dawg


ummm...the intro should have been sped up...literally...I mean on Cool edit, speed the selection up but maintain the pitch...good insert though


Ur voice doesn't stand out from other "white" rappers on this board...and I'm not being racist. I'm saying you sound like @ least 4 other guys here. This wouldn't be a problem if your flow was dynamic enough to carry you, but it isn't. And, your delivery is lackluster. I think you have much potential if you A.) Work on flow, B.) Improve your delivery C.) include some dope metas in ur raps



not bad tho...the creativity in this track is evident...


6.5/10



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