Voted for Ysdat.

yea, i have to give it to ysdat, k.s. you told a nice story, not the most original and the delivery wasn't overly creative, the rhyme scheme and vocabs were pretty basic in comparison to ysdat's, you had ok emotion but it cud've been better, the best aspect was the imagery in ure story-telling. ysdat had a more original approach on the topic, had a better rhyme scheme, his vocabs were more complex than k.s and his overall emotion and imagery were better also, this wasn't the best piece from ysdat but it was the better in this battle..

V/ - Ysdat

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