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Old 11-01-06, 07:38 PM   #14
Paranoid
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Apexx
Your beat choice was cool, I thought you woulda switched it up for me I got sick of it. But you stayed hot with the punchlines, you came pretty hot and stayed consistant. Your flow was deadly and your delivery sounded on lock and you had it serious. Your verse was just a lot more complex and a plus for your quality being better too. nice job pexx

Zone Out
I don't like your quality man, makes ya voice sound depressed idk. Your beat choices were good and ya flow was good. You just weren't consistant with the punchlines as well. You keep talkin and hardly rap, your verse was still good, you got better throughout it. You remind to much of lil wayne with ya voice and the way you pronounce shit. I just aint feelin ya verse as much dude. nice job though man.
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