I be quick to give premantions I split emcees like-fision
Only dreams u cud invision winning but that’s not my mission
this shit was decent....coulda been harder....6/10
Dawg ya verse needs work, cause new methed brings the hurt
Bury 6ft in dirt, ya lines older den the cum stains on cali’s ya shirt
LOL shit was aiight...hmm i give this 6/10
Ya aint walking-by-me, be cause im just too-high-see
Don’t lie-b ima burn ya music and I don’t mean piracy
this shit wasnt too good...worded it bad 5/10

overall: this shit was decent but could of been harder......you had bad word choices for the multi's and you did the basic multi's thats good too.but the advanced multi's will give you a better change of winnin..
18/30


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Graphically Wack Im Scratchin Your Tracks While Cuttin Your Slacks...
Lyrically Lack Im Detatchin Your Back, Vertibrae Unfragilely Unstacked...
[b]This was fuckin sick right..yes these are multi's 8/10
Out With The Old In With The New? You Make That Phase Very Untrue...
Up Goes The Fuss That 'U Through', Walk In Ur Shoe? Barefoot Sounds Coo...
LOL second line was dope..first line...wasnt a good set up 7/10
Freestylin You Improvisin, Then Fat Joe Exercisin And Einstein Revisin...
I See You Cryin, Only Newbs Takin Ur Lie-In So Ya Image Rapidly Dyin...
Jea this was a dope closer.....8/10

overall:
good shit dawg...i like how you used...punches....vocabulary...wordplay and multi's.....shit was dope..and the first 2 lines werent basic lines.....Dope shit fam

23/30

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