Voted For: LPMNDCTE
Invicta
I hate your style, it's terribly played and a hirrid image with witness
Since you come up with enough wack shit to put 50 cent outta buisiness
^ hirrid? don't you mean horrid???...i unno i kinda liked this opener wasn't too bad feelin the punch a lil[b]
So talk shit faggot I don't even listen, i'll stomp and shatter ur chin
Someone's got to be the bigger man.......it's just weird you hit on him
[b]^ got the punch but just not feeling it...do you have any evidence?
You'd never get in the studio guy, you are legit just a fuckin disgrace
The only way you impact RB is leaving with the imprint of my fist in ur face
^ dude no dis-respect but concentrate on him and not how you'll hurt his face, self-glory isn't the best way to go[b]
Stop crying geek cuz you are worth nothin, u ain't no rock nor boulder
Only way your on top of you game is when your standing on X box controlers
[b]^ haha fuck knows if it's played or not given my absence but i liked it (i had a picture of that happening...cool line[b]
I don't need shit for you, your poor with words, no need to repeat it
Cuz i bet if I came up with some hot shit, this broke fuck would prolly eat it
[b]^ not the strongest of closers...IMO 4th bar should've been the closer...this was filler
Overall
Not overly bad but not great...4th bar i liked but i think filler took over your verse...maintained a constant text flow rhymes were basic and more multis would be more effective...
LPMNDCTE
ya whole sex life's a hoax, but you love to slob down men
the last homie that got Invicta caught a disease from him
^ maybe it's coz i'm English but meh..
& its contagious & its a must I slaughter this gay fag
this yellow belly coward turn plush red for boys..
...and looks identical to the Maryland State Flag
^ I'll have to go with you on that one i've never seen the Maryland state flag but it's alright
claimed your beating the B.E.S.T., but I'm like dude whatever
if your words your bond, musta crazy glued that shit together
^ whatever/together...not the strongest of rhymes...but the actual punch itself was funny
I wrecker the weaker, your agility is just lame
the power you pack couldn't even shake a bed post frame
^ hahaha getting consistent now cool bar
its sad, n I can tell your mainly comming with cunt lines
why else would a pussy set up a battle on Front Lines
^ cunt!...my fav word in the English language!!!...and another good bar...liked it
n I'm great at grappling...Leave ya back plastered
no escape...I cinch the master lock on him like Chris Masters
^ didn't feel this closer...fell off a bit from the previous 3 bars imo
Overall
Pretty much the same delivery and text flow-wise...I actually thought i was going to go against the grain and bring the battle to 2-1 until the 3rd, 4th & 5th bars...both dudes need to step up but i feel consistency won this...
v/LPMNDCTE - Plz RTF here
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