thanx for the feedback, i don't mean to sound cocky but i amazed myself with this cuz so far this is one of my personal favorites out of all my raps i did cuz i used kind of a diffrent method on this one and personally i think it worked alot more better, you're right i do need more elavation but this is sorta a sign that i am too me and thanx too you i just noticed that hook thing u mentioned i meant verse but i accidently swiched it around i fixed it now though