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Old 05-26-05, 03:52 PM   #17
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From: Adanac
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*rolls in with a wicked beat pounding*

this was awesome, seriously......i read it 3 times over, wordness, seemed like this was a difficult topic to write on, well seeing how you two both came out, ever so subtle explainging your insecurities, but managed to explode with emotion and everything, haha

i think i liked your second verse the most atticus, but i read the first one over, and it was still really good, your style is pretty complex, but yet at the same time, works very effectively with how you portray your topics....if that makes sense, word.....emotion was kickin' in this man, great write man, really feeling it

word to OSB, little different approach than usual eh, but it worked nicely...good message, nice flow, great emotion, you really hit the nail on this one man, definately write more, nah sayin?

big props to both here, this was a killer OM, keep up to both fo-sho
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