Sane-you took this pic nice..i liked where u were going with it..nice vocab
nice emotion and ya imagery was on point...u slightly edged this one out

Sin-vocab was was on point, u flipped the words nicely,fit in spots perfect
your imagery could have been upped...but i was feelin absolutely no emotion
and thats really all a topical is about

V/ sane
for slightly edging this out

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