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Old 11-01-05, 12:04 AM   #37
gdot
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the beat choppin is sloppy snares are wack hook singing sounds off pitched i duno
the first cat got a nice delivery quality got some his success line is cool this is a solid verse ur flow seems a little repetitive switch it up during the verse.
hook agian....
flow switched up so that nice styll flow on point as far as i can tell this is a solid track.work on delivery bit and chrisma on some of ya lines
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